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Late critique is late.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Shrug" /> I just can't help but say something on this.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="23" height="19" alt="" title="OMG! I can't contain my excitement!" />
You've done some amazeing job here.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la" /> I usually start with the pixel art on critiques, but I have nothing to say about the pixel art now.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Dead (RIP)" /> Nothing else but awesome.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="18" height="17" alt="" title="I think I've fainted." />
Well next, smooth animation is smooth.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la" /> And the stuff I may want to point out are very minor.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la" />
That guy's snoreing is odd.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Noes!" /> You should've changed something on the emote's body too, something to show that he really is snoreing.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt="" title="I am a dummy!" />
And the orange emote on the swing.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt="" title="I am a dummy!" /> The shadows on the ground are really nice.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> But the swing moment itself is a bit odd, I'd move the emote a bit more backwards.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod" />
Just because there;s a feeling that he comes forward, then he gets back and then he's stopping on some invisible wall or something.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="17" alt="" title="O_o" />My poor english can't explain everything normally.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p…" width="23" height="15" alt="" title="They're all out to get me..." />
Overall, amazeing piece.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la" />