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Milk box Pixelart 3D animation by =MixedMilkChOcOlate:iconMixedMilkChOcOlate:

Categories Digital Art > Pixel Art > Objects > Isometric

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Milk box Pixelart 3D animation test

Critique would be really appreciate on this work because I know it's odd :aww:

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Update :

What do you think of the box now ?

Colours ?
Texte ?
Box Size ?

Thanks everybody for helping me :pray:

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=KimRaiFan Jul 19, 2009, 10:46:20 AM
You’ve said you know it’s odd.:roll:
Well, yeah.:B It’s oddly interesanting and addictive to watch.:giggle:
The animation is awesum.:clap: I don’t think you can find a way to make it look smoother.:slow:I like the way you made the shadows appear as the box spins.:meow: You may make them darker, but just a veryveryvery tiny bit, because if you make them too dark then the animation would look ugly. :noes: And also, a too dark shadow would destroy the nice effect the white outline gives to the whole piece.:shakefist: But if about the animation, that ‘Milk’ thingie seems to be moveing by itself at some point.:crazy:
You pixeled everything nice, except that the box doesn’t look like a milk box, it looks like a box of matches.:roll: It’s too thin.:no: Make it fatter.:iconanimefaceplz:

Also, that white pixels may look weird, but they are after all a very nice touch.:nod: The way you animated them makes the box spin better.:slow: Without them, the box would maybe be jumping rather than spinning.:giggle:

And really, nothing it’s odd at this thingie.:giggle: Maybe you feel it’s odd just because of the idea...^^; But it’s not odd at all.:aww: It’s pretty and original and interesanting and cute and...
It’s a good job you’ve made.:giggle::
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=BlissfullySarcastic Jul 19, 2009, 8:51:44 AM
Hm, I'm going to get the positives out before the negatives this time. Switching it up some. xD
You did a great job in shading and transferring the shading as it spins. It's a bit grid-like, but I still like it, especially how it looks with the white outline.
The animation is very smooth too, great job on that. I honestly thought it'd be a lot choppier, because it's a hard object to rotate, but it doesn't seem jumpy or choppy at all.
I also like the little white pixels on the bottom that lift it, they were a nice touch.

And now onto the negatives.
I have never in my life seen a milk box that would be that skinny. It is very disproportional that way.
The lines next to the edges seem very out of places as well, and it makes it harder to make out.
It seems like the top part should be at a bit more of an angle too, and I don't see on the too-skinny part the indent that slope would've made on the package. Watch that.

All together, it's a great job, just a few bugs here and there.
It's addicting to watch for whatever reason, to be quite honest. xD Great animation, as always.
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=burningfrost888 Jul 19, 2009, 8:43:20 AM
Hmm, that's interesting. :O_o:

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=MixedMilkChOcOlate Jul 19, 2009, 8:44:25 AM
Thank you but I think it need some improvment :)

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~NekoSoraYagami Jul 19, 2009, 8:44:27 AM
I think its great.
The colors you choose fit it perfectly.
Dunno, the little dust/sparkles make it look like its some milkbox rocket taking off.

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=MixedMilkChOcOlate Jul 19, 2009, 8:45:52 AM
Yes I like those colour and you are right for the dust ^^
I think the rotation need some improvment ^^;

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~mignesme Jul 19, 2009, 8:47:31 AM
I was waiting for better from you when i saw the word milk box.
1st your box is transparent :/ kinda weird, you could have done it in white with blue lines and write milk in light pink :/

this isnt this great :( but the form is nice :)

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Mood: Wow! ~admx Jul 19, 2009, 8:49:53 AM
Holy Crap, it's awesome!!! I think that you have to fix a little bit the letters :bucktooth: :+fav:

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=leogomes91 Jul 19, 2009, 8:51:16 AM
it's perfect =D
is that the super secret work you told me about??
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~Filsk-The-Dark-One Jul 19, 2009, 8:52:00 AM
AWESOOOOME!:+fav:

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=KimRaiFan Jul 19, 2009, 8:55:55 AM
Interesanting.=P
I think you find it odd because of that overdose of white pixels.:slow: It's like the milk flies away:noes:

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~SkyfersSpirit Jul 19, 2009, 8:56:24 AM
magical spinning, floating milk.

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