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Just disappear

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*Pouff* it's disappear again and again ^^

Update after droneguard critic !

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Want to try an Emoticon platform game ?

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Critique tiems <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/e/e…" width="23" height="19" alt=":excited:" title="OMG! I can't contain my excitement!" />

I love it how you always experiment with your emotes, that way you really learn a lot about them, and know what to do and don't in your next emotes <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod" />

There are some elements that you could change in order to advance this emote and make it look even better.

-First is the jumping: it could go a bit faster. Not too much, otherwise you loose focus on the concept.

-When his body starts disappearing: You could try to make them appear slowly, increasing in speed and quantity.

- The respawn: Perhaps adding a upcoming horizontal line before his white body poofs into the screen again so that it seems that he comes back with light speed or such might give it that extra feeling to it.

I love it how you've added some clouds when he disappears, it really reminds me of those vanishing cartoon characters <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle" />
The shading looks good, as well as the idea <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />