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I wish I have holidays this year :faint:

Hope you like this :dummy:

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Critiques


:iconkimraifan:
Late critique is late.:shrug: I just can't help but say something on this.:excited:
You've done some amazeing job here.:la: I usually start with the pixel art on critiques, but I have nothing to say about the pixel art now.:dead: Nothing else but awesome.:faint:

Well next, smooth animation is smooth.:la: And the stuff I may want to point out are very minor.:la:
That guy's snoreing is odd.:noes: You should've changed something on the emote's body too, something to show that he really is snoreing.:dummy:
And the orange emote on the swing.:dummy: The shadows on the ground are really nice.:D But the swing moment itself is a bit odd, I'd move the emote a bit more backwards.:nod:
Just because there;s a feeling that he comes forward, then he gets back and then he's stopping on some invisible wall or something.:O_o:My poor english can't explain everything normally.:paranoid:

Overall, amazeing piece.:la:
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:iconnironan12:
Alright! Once more, a fantastic emote! Just looking at it, it's awesome. But let us go deeper so see how we can make it better! :D

:bulletgreen: The background and sky and trees are all well pixelated (and the emotes of course).

:bulletgreen: I love the lily pads (or whatever they are called) in the pond/lake. And those low clouds in the background are quite nice too.

:bulletyellow: It'd be nice if they were reflections in the pond.

:bulletred: The mouth on the snoring emote closes too fast, or rather it just needs some transition just like how it is opening.

:bulletred: The fish are all to clustered and they are going pretty fast. They should kind of go out one after another and a little slower.

:bulletred:The swinging looks a little odd when it's going back, like just a little piece is going back. The whole swing should kind of all go back inwards. :shrug:
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:iconsteph1254:
I adore this, the pixeling as amazing. :)

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:iconrian-angel:
hell yeah, that's cool. ^^
i like the group of fish in the water. (where else? ^^)
The hole scenery is so detailful, you should really zoom in and enjoy it for all the others reading this. ^^

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:iconninjuhbunneh:
Once again, proof that you are a truly amazing pixel artist.

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:iconeattherainbow:
i really like this one.
Great JOB!

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:iconallikiza:
Now there is an Emote with an awesome background. So much done in one small space..

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:iconmixedmilkchocolate:
Thank you so much :bow:

Yes you are right it could be awesome to see the detailled zoomed :meow:

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:iconnikkynikki:
I wish it was nice like that around here :noes: But it's raining right now.

But anyway, this is a great job. I love it :heart:

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