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Seriously, though, this is a really neat idea. You've captured the death star very nicely, and I like the Vader emote standing on top of it.
The details on the death star itself are really nice, but I think some of them could stand out a bit more, like the little crater thing it fires from, so that it's easier to see.
Also, the little effect from what I believe is Luke heading in for the kill shot makes it stand out a lot more, but it looks a little odd to me with the flashing parts. Not sure how you could change it.
Lastly, there's one thing missing. Vader needs a red lightsabre.
Overall, fantastic work!
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