I block comment on this work because I have allready so many comment to answer and this is so long to translate every comment an translate again my answer...
Sorry I'll try to answer everybody before I get more comment and leave DA because my message center is too big
But, haha, you forgot that we can still reach you via critiques, silly French person!
Seriously, though, this is a really neat idea. You've captured the death star very nicely, and I like the Vader emote standing on top of it.
The details on the death star itself are really nice, but I think some of them could stand out a bit more, like the little crater thing it fires from, so that it's easier to see.
Also, the little effect from what I believe is Luke heading in for the kill shot makes it stand out a lot more, but it looks a little odd to me with the flashing parts. Not sure how you could change it.
Lastly, there's one thing missing. Vader needs a red lightsabre.
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Seriously, though, this is a really neat idea. You've captured the death star very nicely, and I like the Vader emote standing on top of it.
The details on the death star itself are really nice, but I think some of them could stand out a bit more, like the little crater thing it fires from, so that it's easier to see.
Also, the little effect from what I believe is Luke heading in for the kill shot makes it stand out a lot more, but it looks a little odd to me with the flashing parts. Not sure how you could change it.
Lastly, there's one thing missing. Vader needs a red lightsabre.
Overall, fantastic work!
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