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Hello,

I didn't submit a lot of work this month (usually I like to spam your message center :lol: ) because I work during 9 days on this new game :la:

A platform game called "Box2Bounce" with emote :

- 5 level
- Many sound
- Interactivity with keyboard and mouse

Enjoy :dummy:

If you like the game fav the news
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I really think this is my best work and I hope you like it :happycry:

BTW my personnal score to finish the game is :
- 78 secondes :la:
- 27 favorite :la:

Best score by ~Marwanshah :worship:
- 60 secondes :la:
- 30 favorite :la:
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Show me a screenshot with you score and the best one will be added on the artist comment :w00t:

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My other flash game :



Flash support stamp :giggle:

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Critiques


:icondrunkenvalley:
I like it! But I wish the sounds in-game weren't so remarkably prominent. It's somewhat disturbing and perhaps out of place while playing.

The controls can offer some idle frustration, particularly because your... character can barely jump high enough for the ledges.

Your game's art style feels pretty smooth and nice, though some more visible effect should occur when finding a "bomb", or when otherwise losing health. It just didn't have the visual feedback that can make deaths... fun.

While playing the game I felt the goal was a bit abstract and I didn't know how long it's meant to last, admittedly.

PS: I'm greedy with ratings, don't worry about it too much, ne? :D
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:iconoktanas:
Let's play Box2Bounce.
The preview window looks great :thumbsup: but why there is a 2 in the game title it's not a sequal or anything like that so why to put there a 2. I know why because it was to hard to write "to" *drinks some beer :beer:*

Ok let's start the game the title screen looks great, but why you can't use your keyboard to select what you want to do. Why I have to use a mouse to do that??? And was it hard to make those boxes to have some difrences wich do what why do you get small text what the box do when you hover your mouse over the box only then text apear and it looks like it was done in a hurry. And where it sayes "choose a box" in the next line there is "|".

Ok lets try playing the game.
The grafics are awesome for a flash game. Animation are very smooth.
Controls are prety bad. When you hold forward or back for longer it gets more speed and to jump somewhere you must press space at the right time or you will hit the platform and bounce of. This get's realy frustrating when you trying 10 time's to jump on a platform and then 10 to jump on the other platform and then emote slips down from the platform AND YOU HAVE TO START FROM THE BEGING :pissed: *drinks some more beer :beer:* Why cant he jump left or right from standing position that would be a lot easier.

When you reach the levels end you just hit the wall of the house and the screen just goes black for half a second and from that you must gues that you are in a difrent level. Was it so hard to put some summary screen or a screen that shows you that you are in a difrent level super mario bros had that even resident evil 5 has this *:beer:*

Ok let's continue:
In entire game there is only ONE type of enemy some orange blob that's it was it so hard to change the color of the blob to green and make it have more life???

Colecting:
After seeing the main screen you thought there would be some boxes that you can get some coins or something that you collect well gues what THERE ARE NO THAT KIND OF BOXES IN THE GAME. And what do you colect is Deviantart's :+fav: icons well that's ok because it was ment to be for Deviantart. Your life is represented by a heart with + and here we are again with the text why so simple text the grafics of the game looks fantastic but the text in the game is like you opened notepad and wrote the entire text of the game there. The other thing that can hurt you is exploading present boxes but you never know wich is exploding and wich has a :+fav: so you have to gues and be hope you are lucky. AND GUES WHAT THERE ARE NO CONTINUE WHEN YOU DIE YOU HAVE START FROM THE BEGINING!!! *drinks some beer :beer:*

The end screen is also prety good for exception for the text.


Dont get me wrong this game is good but could do with few improvements. I hope next time you when you be creating a game add this thing's I mentioned.
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:iconkimraifan:
This..
Is...
Epic...
:noes:

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:iconmixedmilkchocolate:
Thank you :thanks:

Do you remember you score :?

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:iconpheis:
This is cool, I like it. :)
:iconmixedmilkchocolate:
Thank you so much :aww:
Can I know your score at this game :?

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:iconmirz123:
I suck at games...but this is SOOO cool. Excellent work! :clap: And highly addictive. :noes:

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:iconkarimdesign:
Impressionnant! O_o

Bien joué, c'est superbe! :)

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:iconshauwna:
c'est super tres beau boulot ^_^

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:iconmixedmilkchocolate:
Merci beaucoup :la:
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:iconmixedmilkchocolate:
haha me too but I can make game :rofl:
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Merci beaucoup :la:
Tu pourrais me dire ton score si tu as finis le jeu :?

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